Okay, so, I give the manuscript and synopsis to my dad to read and he is dead set against me sending this piece out as is. He says it screams amateur (I say truth in advertising) and that it's not ready.
So, I've had offers in the past from some friends on here, but don't want to assume anything.

Would anyone be willing to read my Titanic novella and beta for me??? Synopsis too, btw. I really wanted to send this out tonight, but now I'm not so sure.

Part of me wants to say it's because it's not like anything I've ever written before that he's objecting to it, but I just don't know. He also said that I have about fifteen to 20 years before my writing matures to the point that it'll be published.

If you are willing, please PM me or email me with your email so I can send the attachments. They're too big to put up on here as private entries.